We, humans, have spread across the universe since the unfortunate demise of our home planet to catastrophic climate change. Still, no matter how far we expand into the cosmos, life hasn’t been found with an intelligence that matches our own.
Most people secretly dream of being the one to make first contact. Not me though, all I dream about is getting my next paycheck from the company. It’s starting to look like the universe is a barren place. Maybe that’s for the best, after all, there’s no guarantee that the aliens we meet will be happy to see us and consider us equal; they could be so far above us that they don’t even view us as a sentient lifeform.
So, we humans have the universe all to ourselves. Which is very fortunate for me, as no one can complain when planets are mined for resources across the galaxy; until there are no usable resources left on their surface. I’m what’s known as a cartographer of sorts. I track down the next planet, with enough viable resources to be worth my company’s while.
I’m only one of many cartographers assigned to this same task. If my planet isn’t chosen then I won’t get that glorious commission. Without it, my family will be stuck on Alpha seven for another year at least. It’s a planet with a barely breathable atmosphere, that’s far too overcrowded to be a pleasant place for young children to live; they deserve so much more.
I finally land my small shuttle on the surface of the latest unexplored planet I have selected. It doesn’t have a name yet, but in my head, I’m calling it Frostbite because, even upon entry, I can see that the entire planet is covered in layers of snow and ice.
I add it to the galactic map with a tap to my wrist that activates the chip lodged under my skin that connects to Lance (Long-range, Analytic, Network, Collective, Experience is too much of a mouthful to say more than once.)
The chip under my skin allows me to tap into that wealth of knowledge and add to it as needed. Every citizen of the coalition is required to get one by the age of sixteen, failure to do so would result in becoming classed as a non-citizen. All of your human rights would be null and void from that point onward.
After putting on my space suit, I open the hatch set into the right side of my craft. Immediately a gust of cold air slams into me.
Lance then starts to inform me of the status of the planet, in its preprogrammed robotic male voice that always sounds like a professor talking down to a student.
Thank you for activating me, James. The atmosphere is unbreathable, taking off your suit would lead to certain death. Parts of the planet seem to be severely colder than is safe for human habitation. Spending time in these areas would result in your body suffering from hypothermia and eventually expiring. Gravity is well within an acceptable range for your vehicle to function as expected. There are traces of minerals and resources on the planet’s surface. The closest one is five hundred miles away to the north. I will mark the location on your map. Ensure that you remember without direct visual confirmation of the value of this planet, the company will not accept your planet as a viable candidate. All commission will, therefore, be null and void even if this planet proves to be profitable to the company later.
‘I know, Lance, you really don’t need to tell me how to do my job. I’ve been doing it just fine for years now.’ Lance is permanently in the head of every member of the coalition, latent until you activate the chip, for the times when you don’t want the company peering through your eyes.
It’s hard to imagine how people coped without Lance. It’s such an intrinsic part of daily life now, but it’s still irritating when it tries to tell me the correct way to do my job. It’s like an all-seeing overseer breathing down my neck.
I pull the small quad bike through the hatch and out of my shuttle. It should get me to the deposit in about an hour, assuming there are no unforeseen issues.
I reach down and start the engine. Its soft purring sound, which is solely for effect, fills the atmosphere. The thing runs off electricity but I like the retro feel it gives me. I start to drive towards the mineral deposit. The main thing to look out for on a planet that mostly consists of ice are the crevices; fall into one of these and I would be stuck until help arrived. It would be goodbye to my commission, and help doesn’t always arrive in time. I could starve. It happened recently to one of my colleagues, or competition, as we like to refer to each other.
Space is vast and the company doesn’t exactly care if we make it back safe and sound, that responsibility falls solely on our own shoulders.
The snow gets progressively thicker as I approach the deposit of unknown minerals.
You should vacate this sector as soon as possible, you are passing through an area that has lower temperatures than your suit can withstand.
‘Lance there’s no need to state the obvious. Where’s the next deposit that might be of interest?’
Exactly one thousand three hundred and fifty-five miles to the east of your current location.
‘I’ll keep on target for the first deposit. I’ll deviate from it if the cold starts to get to me.’ I really don’t want this to take more time than it has to.
I set off riding over a sheet of ice so clear that it starkly reflects the grey sky above. The treads on my wheels should keep me from skidding, but I slow down as an extra precaution.
The chill is starting to work its way through to my fingers, making them clumsy, almost numb. Lance is never wrong. This temperature is much too low for my suit to keep me insulated. I can’t light my torch while riding my quad bike, the heat isn’t worth an avoidable accident.
I reach the deposit, a cave filled with a glittering substance just as the temperature drops rapidly for a second time. The planet darkens around me as night falls. I switch on my head light and scan the deposit; it’s more diamond than I’ve ever laid eyes on. Perfect to sell to people with more money than sense.
That is a highly valuable form of carbon. It increases the planet’s value. I have informed the company. Unfortunately, there is not enough present in this deposit to make it worth the company’s time.
‘I’m aware of that Lance,’ I mutter, then climb back on to my quad bike. ‘I’m heading to the next deposit.’ The weather doesn’t get any better as I make progress. It remains punishingly cold to the point where I feel chilled to the core.
My eyes are focused on the horizon, lights make ribbon-like patterns in the sky, colours interlocking and intermingling with each other. Before I know it, my wheels struggle to get traction on empty air; I’m plummeting into the depths of a crevice. I hit the ground hard, my bike breaks my fall but is shattered beyond repair. Formidable ice walls rear up on all sides but one.
Trapped. There goes my commission.
There’s a passageway made out of marble. It looks like something only a person would be able to make. I head down the passageway, it’s so narrow that I have to crawl.
‘Lance, no human has ever lived on this planet, have they?’
That is correct. There have never been any humans that have settled on this planet. If there had been, the planet would not have been deemed fit for possible resource mining. That structure you are seeing must be part of a natural formation. Formed over time by a combination of weathering and erosion.
The passageway opens up into a larger hall with carvings etched into the wall. ‘This doesn’t look like any kind of “natural formation” that I’ve ever seen.’
I light my torch. At a push of a button, the synthetic flame flickers to life and casts shadows on the walls that surround me. The warmth of it is appreciated on this planet, a beacon of hope against the encroaching darkness and isolation.
I approach the wall with the largest set of carvings. Most of them are indecipherable and look to be some kind of ancient writing. However, one stands out among the others. It’s a two-legged figure that looks almost like a person with a few key differences; its eyes are much wider and it has appendages that look like wings sprouting out of its back. It’s holding a vibrant red ball of fire in its hand, the only part of the wall with a dash of colour.
This figure could easily be an angel of some kind. What are the chances two planets would have this in common? Unless there’s a connection to earth out here on this planet, the other side of the universe.
Lance’s voice cuts through my thoughts.
The company is advising you to go back to your shuttle. There is nothing more of interest to be found here.
‘I can’t go back, I need to find a way out first.’ I deactivate Lance with a swipe of my hand, then force my eyes away from the carving and walk further into the temple-like structure. More of the carvings line the wall, all of them are depicted holding fire.
It gets warmer the further I walk down the hallway, even my torch burns brighter. The flame curves towards the end of the hall, as if pulled by an invisible force.
Unfortunately, the hallway ends in a dead end. Unless there’s another way out I’m going to be trapped down here until a rescue team arrives. If a rescue team arrives. The fire already burns on two scones set into the wall in front of me, which explains the heat. One either side of the biggest carving yet. It depicts one of the angelic figures, handing down fire to what seem to be people. Actual people.
A dull ache begins at the back of my head, which soon turns into a blinding pain. My torch clatters to the ground as the strength leaves my hands in a sudden rush.
We appreciate your years of service, but you have violated the terms and service of your contract. As such, I regret to inform you that you are being terminated by order of the company. Effective immediately. I am instructed to make your death as humane as possible.’
‘I deactivated you! You shouldn’t be able to do anything.’ My words have no force behind them and come out as a whisper. What I really want to do is shout, but my strength has already left me.
Fear coils in my gut. Lance never lies, the company have signed my death warrant. I slide down the wall when my legs can no longer support my weight.
I am always with you, James. The deactivation is simply to give you the illusion of privacy.
This monstrosity is in everyone’s heads at all times. It kills at the company’s beck and call.
My last thought is of my family. I hope they’ll be okay.
Lance listens, indifferent to my plight, then starts to send a transmission to the company when its work is done: As requested, I will log the information that I gathered from his implant and relay it to you. An alien settlement has been found, the flame located here appears to be the eternal energy source you have been searching for.
End of transmission.
About the author
Rachel Lovat is a writer who has enjoyed writing about anything and everything sci-fi for as long as she can remember. It’s a genre that calls her back time and time again and will no doubt continue to do so in the future. Inspiration is never far away for Rachel. Learn more about her on her blog https://writingeveninarainstorm.home.blog/