There were many people who helped me out with technical review, including:
Amie
Jenn Clack
Stephanie Hill
Alan Balthrop
Loa Ledbetter
CJ
Minde Briscoe
Trisha
Joann Casper
Lisa Lapkovitch
Bethany
Virginia
Sharon Sams
Also, a special note for someone I left out of the dedication for Feast of Fools even though I promised to put her in:
Sarah Magilnick
Sarah, I’m very sorry for leaving you out. It was completely my fault.